Your First Email: Greeting, Message, Closing
A1 · Writing Lab · about 25 minutes
1 · Learn
Every email, long or short, has the same skeleton: Greeting → Message → Closing. “Hi Sarah,” opens it. Two to four sentences carry your news or request. “Best,” or “Thanks,” plus your name closes it.
Write the subject line too — it tells the reader what the email is about before they open it: “Homework question”, “Party on Saturday”, “Thank you”. An email with no subject looks unfinished.
2 · See an Example
A Short, Complete Email
Subject: Thank you for dinner
Hi Sophia,
Thank you for dinner on Friday. The food was delicious, and your family is very kind. I had a great time.
Let’s meet again soon. Maybe coffee next week?
Best,
Emma
3 · Analyze the Example
- Subject line. “Thank you for dinner” — the reader knows the topic in three seconds.
- Greeting with a comma. “Hi Sophia,” — name + comma. For a teacher, use “Dear Mr. Johnson,”.
- Short message, one topic. Three sentences: thanks, a detail, a next step (coffee next week).
- Closing + name. “Best,” then the name on its own line. friendly closings: Best, Thanks, See you soon.
Useful Vocabulary
Write a clear subject line.
Start with a friendly greeting.
“Best,” is a friendly closing.
The dinner was delicious.
See you soon.
Useful Expressions
- Subject: …
- Hi … , / Dear Mr. … ,
- Thank you for …
- Let’s … soon.
- Best, / Thanks,
Common Mistakes
✗ Hi Sophia. Thank you for dinner.
✓ Hi Sophia, Thank you for dinner.
A greeting takes a comma, and the message starts on a new line.
✗ Dear teacher Johnson,
✓ Dear Mr. Johnson,
Use Dear + Mr./Ms. + last name for teachers and formal emails.
✗ (no subject) — an email that starts with “Hi,…” only
✓ Subject: Homework question
Every email needs a subject line that names the topic.
4 · Guided Practice
Write a subject line for an email that thanks your teacher for a book.
See a model answer
Subject: Thank you for the book
Fix the greeting and closing: “hi mr. parkersee you emma”
See a model answer
Hi Mr. Parker, … See you soon, Emma
Write one thank-you sentence for a birthday gift.
See a model answer
Example: Thank you for the birthday gift. I love it!
5 · Write — Your Task
✍️ Write a short email to a friend: thank them for something (a dinner, a gift, help with English), add one detail you liked, and suggest meeting soon.
Goal: Subject + greeting + 3–4 sentences + closing · Length: 40–60 words
- Do not forget the subject line.
- Greeting: “Hi + first name,” for a friend.
- Close with “Best,” or “Thanks,” and your name on its own line.
6 · Check — Self-Check
Work through your checklist honestly, then run the Self-Check. It counts words and sentences and spots mechanical points — it does not grade your English. You are the editor.
Read a model answer for the task
Subject: Thank you for the cake
Hi Lily,
Thank you for the birthday cake. It was beautiful and delicious. My family loved it too.
Let’s have coffee at my house next week. Saturday or Sunday?
Thanks,
Julia
7 · Improve & Rewrite
Weak version — rewrite it in your notebook first, then compare:
hi jack thanks for the game it was fun bye tom (no subject)
See an improved version
Subject: Thank you for the game
Hi Jack,
Thank you for the game. It was fun, and your team played very well.
Best,
Tom
Quick Quiz
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