Email Studio: Email: Asking a Librarian for Sources

Core · about 7 minutes · aim for 100-150 words.

Your task

You are writing a research paper and need help finding academic sources. Write an email to a university librarian, Ms. Thompson.

Your email must:

  • Explain what kind of sources you are looking for
  • Ask whether the library has them or can order them
  • Ask how to access the materials once they are available

0 words · target ≈ 100-150 words

Model email & full-answer points — after writing

Subject: Help Finding Sources on Urban Green Spaces

Dear Ms. Thompson,

I am a graduate student in urban planning, and I am writing a research paper on how urban green spaces affect residents' mental health. I am looking for recent academic journal articles on this topic, especially studies published in the last five years that compare different cities.

I have searched the library catalog, but I found only a few relevant articles, and two of them are not available in full text. Does the library subscribe to any other databases that I should search? If the articles I need are not in the collection, is it possible for the library to order them through interlibrary loan?

Finally, could you tell me how I would access these materials once they become available? For example, would I receive an email with a download link, or should I check my library account?

Thank you for your assistance.

Kind regards,
James Okafor

A full answer must

  • Identify your field and research topic so the librarian can target the search
  • Specify what you need precisely (type of source, date range, focus)
  • Mention what you have already tried before asking for help
  • Cover the ordering question and the access question separately
  • Keep questions clear and numbered by idea, not piled into one sentence

Self-evaluation checklist — the 10-point review

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